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In the Meadowland

Over in the meadowland the birds are singing Warm weather portends the returning of spring The bees have set about their pollen bringing. Hopeful, bright spring days with excitement tingling Cause our voices to shout out and lustily sing, Over in the meadowland the birds are singing While with glee my life’s breath is mingling So happy I feel like life is gaudy glitter and bling The bees have set about their pollen bringing. Spring to me reminds of Barnum and Ringling The colorful memories of childhood bring Over in the meadowland the birds are singing. I can reminisce about the high school flinging The loss of my first love that brought a sting, The bees have set about their pollen bringing. The season of spring brings to me self-healing More than anything else, a welcoming thing, The bees have set about their pollen bringing Over in the meadowland the birds are singing.
FIRST PLACE WINNER edited April 7, 2022 written January 21, 2022 for "Springtime Villanelle" Poetry Contest sponsored by Sotto Poet

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Date: 5/9/2022 1:45:00 PM
Hi Milt, Congratulations on a well-deserved win:-)Alexis
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2022 5:58:00 PM
Alexis, thanks so much. I appreciate it.
Date: 5/9/2022 10:17:00 AM
Great imagery and flow, Milt, congratulations on your win in Lassad's contest. Blessings my friend
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Date: 5/9/2022 5:06:00 AM
Congratulations, Dear Milton, on your top win. Love the amazing flow of your creation, and poetic beauty of a flawless unique form. BW ~ Mala
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2022 7:46:00 AM
Thank you, Mala, for your sweet kindness. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Date: 5/6/2022 8:27:00 PM
"self-healing More than anything else" - Beautiful experience. Congratulations!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/6/2022 8:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, Chris. That it is!
Date: 5/6/2022 11:51:00 AM
Milt, congratulations on winning first place in my contest. You've written an amazingly beautiful, flawless poem. Blessings my friend.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/6/2022 11:53:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Lasaad. It was a pleasure and a joy to write for your contest, and I am so pleased you felt my poem was first place quality. I have read several of the poems that were submitted, and you had quite a task before you. You did a fine job!
Date: 4/11/2022 9:07:00 AM
Such a nice flow and enjoyable read. Best wishes in the contest. — MDJ
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/11/2022 10:47:00 AM
Thanks, MD. Thanks for the read and your encouraging comment.
Date: 1/22/2022 9:53:00 AM
I love this one. To my fave list.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/22/2022 9:57:00 AM
Well, thank you, Caren. I appreciate it. Glad you like it.

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