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Musée du Louvre — Museum Review | Condé Nast Traveler

In the Louvre With Xavier

(The Shattered Mirror of Avignon)
Five women stand, yet all are broke.
Against a curtain of ochre, blue, and white,
Picasso breaks the world with a savage stroke,
Reordering flesh into jagged, painted night.
Two sit in masks of African heat,
With eyes of daggers, vacant and intense,
Their limbs disjointed, monstrous, yet complete,
A fierce assault on beauty’s old defense.

See the prostitute on the left—archaic, frozen—
A nod to Spain, a shadow of the past,
While her sisters, on the right, remain chosen
To bear the mask, a spell of anger cast.
No sensuous reclining, no soft embrace,
But angularity that confronts the gaze,
Stealing the viewer’s quiet, private space,
And holding him within this broken maze.

They do not smile; they threaten from the canvas,
An “ugly” genius, a scandal wrought in 1907.
Rejecting perspective, a violent impetus,
Turning a brothel into a fragmented heaven.
It is the birth of the machine, the modern, cold,
A mirror shattering the Renaissance view,
Where beauty is not worshipped, but controlled,
And all that was known is made anew.
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Goldsmith Avatar
May 17, 2026 at 1:08 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story again.  Have a fun day with your wonderful win...............
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 17, 2026 at 1:43 PM
Thank you for being a good friend.
Caliri Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 3:09 PM
I've been to the Louvre and that's EXACTLY what Xavier would say. Congrats on 4th place in my contest! Love to direction you took this prompt. Exquisite art commentary as a bonus!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 17, 2026 at 1:40 PM
Matt, you are appreciated, my friend, for all the generous mentions ~ William.
Roper Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 5:05 PM
So well expressed. The imagery and feel of Picasso's work... I was never fond of his work; it reminded me of a very disturbed person. As you know, I love the world and its art. It has blessed us; to me, realism has its own expressed meanings.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 11:09 AM
Not much of a fan of cubism art, which was Picasso’s forte, portraying the oddities of life; nevertheless, his contribution to the world of art was significant for a select group of admirers.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 24, 2026 at 9:36 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story. What a great picture you have here. "Good Luck" We both did this fun contest... Have a great/fun day writing away............
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
March 24, 2026 at 1:31 PM
A review of Picasso’s artwork. Thank you.
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