"in the Heat of Pasion" (To Angela Wih Love)

The first time I saw you, there was a glow about you
      that baffle me.  I-I just could not find the right word,
     "you had that certain glow about you".  Not the way you walk
       nor the way you move, "but I believe in miracle's", yes
      I do - yes I do.  So finally I step to you and ask, would you,
       could you smile ? just for the camara in my mind so that the
      image of an Angel would be on my mind just in case the world
      ended (today) much to soon, much before time.  The first time
     I saw you naked Angela, my mouth got lost for words-but the one
      that slip through my lip's were (mmmunn) "what a gorcious women,
      breast like lucious melons", and a voice (sweet) like that of the ocean
     and wave's of heat and my idea of nerviousness brings trembeling to
     my feet's.
    "I do believe in miracle's", "I do not believe in love".  Miracle's that it
       take to sustain a relationship that the odd's of longivity are against us.
      And we do become desponded, most of our day is spent fussing and cussing.
     Never to see true love at its best.  The first time our lip's did touch, I remem-
     ber this Angel who I call Angela, she had my name tattoe across her chest.
      Love, became the missing attraction, and you comfort me in my desire to ex
    press myself, for I thought I was so macho, never in a thousand years, "will I
      meet such a someone (?) that's such a women".  A women (aaaah) such a
    women, "from her head to her shoe".  
       Now Angela just in case the world ends tomorrow.  Don't denie that there's an
       "attraction".  O'Angela.....kiss me quickly, "In the heat of Passion".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Duke Avatar
July 10, 2010 at 9:33 AM
WOW!!! Mr. Streeter; This is another HOT!!!hot one ~~indeed~~indeed: "I like this a lot, and that-just sayying it lightly". "A Special Shoutout" *to you* $Wayne$ From: Sharderra
Moody Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 8:26 AM
Very Good (very-good) indeed wayne, this is the type most womens dream about that they would likt their significant other too say to them.
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July 2, 2010 at 8:01 AM
I read this poem, and read it over and over again. Then I show it to my girlfriend (marilyn) and we were mesmerised over the lyrics in the writting. (WOW-HOT) this is real nice Wayne: With Sincere Love (Ty & Marilyn)
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