In the Haze

Time 
flies in
seconds flat
as days and nights 
vanish in the haze 
they disappear 
 a complete 
waste of
time


Date Poem Submitted : Sixth Of June 20/20

Contest : Ninette

Sponsor : Emile Pinet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kendrick Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 4:17 AM
Or maybe your time wasn't wasted, maybe somewhere out there in the future each second will show results. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K.
Kerr Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 6:15 AM
Thanks for your optimistic slant, Sara. Your visits are informative and edifying H
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 1:55 PM
We live in a haze of memories as time passes do fleeting. Nice one that I am first to comment on!
Allison Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 12:43 PM
your poem made me smile, time certainly does fly:-) hugs Jan xx
Kerr Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 2:51 PM
Hello Jan, Thanks for your soup mail contact. Congratulations on your well deserved award. I’m pleased that my work produced a smile on someone’s face. It’s a departure for me in many ways. Best of luck to you in your writing career Warmth Howard
Mishra Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 2:37 PM
Congratulations on your win for this witty one Howard :)
Kerr Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 3:54 PM
Hello Aditi, I introduced some changes to my style for this contest and it worked. Thanks for your soup mail, and your slant on my entry. I wish you the very best of luck with all your writing projects. Howard
Pinet Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations Howard, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, well done my friend, Emile.
Kerr Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 10:55 AM
Hi Emile, I am so grateful to you for this award. Such a placements are always treasured and taken seriously by me. Best wishes Howard
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 6:11 PM
Oh, good one! My best to you in the contest. ~mo
Kerr Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 7:16 PM
Hi Mo Thank you so much for your comment and best wishes. Reviews from fellow poets are always warmly welcomed by me. I wish you the very in all the contests you enter too Howard
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