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In the Garden

I see my love, her face such a glow, long red hair, tied tight with pink bow. She pulls the lace string, her hair falls away, nodding it gently, auburn waves magically sway. Arbitrium Divisa

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/28/2019 9:56:00 PM

I’m surprised you don’t have more comments. You are definitely a poet worth pondering.

Kenneth Brenner
Date: 6/28/2019 10:12:00 PM

This came from my poem "Auburn Haired Beauty".. There is two parts to the series so far..i plan on 5 total within the set..Please read them Richard..they are different but I value them..i enjoy reading them repeatedly..lol..Thankyou so much for fantastic comment Rich..THANKU!!!..:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2019 6:13:00 PM

what a beautiful picture of this beauty!! Congrats on your win.

Kenneth Brenner
Date: 6/15/2019 5:49:00 PM

Thank you mucho,mucho, Andrea I value your comment. I enjoy this type of contest taking a stanza from a current work, and transforming it to a completely different work. For us to accomplish this we have a vivid imagination. :-)

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/13/2019 10:08:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Kenneth. Congrats on your win.

Kenneth Brenner
Date: 6/15/2019 5:53:00 PM

Line, I greatly appreciate your comment. It seems I go unnoticed even after placing high within a contest, but, you always take the time to write to me. Thank you once again from me, my mind, and my pen... :-)