In the Garden

I see my love, her face such a glow,
long red hair, tied tight with pink bow.
She pulls the lace string, her hair falls away,
nodding it gently, auburn waves magically sway.






Arbitrium Divisa
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Lamoureux Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 9:56 PM
I’m surprised you don’t have more comments. You are definitely a poet worth pondering.
Brenner Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 10:12 PM
This came from my poem "Auburn Haired Beauty".. There is two parts to the series so far..i plan on 5 total within the set..Please read them Richard..they are different but I value them..i enjoy reading them repeatedly..lol..Thankyou so much for fantastic comment Rich..THANKU!!!..:-)
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 6:13 PM
what a beautiful picture of this beauty!! Congrats on your win.
Brenner Avatar
June 15, 2019 at 5:49 PM
Thank you mucho,mucho, Andrea I value your comment. I enjoy this type of contest taking a stanza from a current work, and transforming it to a completely different work. For us to accomplish this we have a vivid imagination. :-)
Gauthier Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 10:08 AM
Beautiful imagery, Kenneth. Congrats on your win.
Brenner Avatar
June 15, 2019 at 5:53 PM
Line, I greatly appreciate your comment. It seems I go unnoticed even after placing high within a contest, but, you always take the time to write to me. Thank you once again from me, my mind, and my pen... :-)
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