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In the Forest of My Dreams

When darkness falls to night’s embrace Coy and chimeric dreams I chase. They beckon then lead me astray - Ephemeral and fey they play. Dreams fondle my subconscious mind, Then toy with my erotic side, As I submissively await, Earning my trust, they dissipate. Lost in the forest of my dreams I break free from their tempting themes. Shedding the shadow of the night I embrace new dawn’s lucid light. April 11, 2021

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Date: 1/4/2022 8:51:00 AM
I love the beautiful lines that you have created through carefully selected rhyme patterns. Beautiful poem! Congrats!
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Date: 1/2/2022 3:11:00 AM
Your unworldly mysterious poem drew me in from the start Margarita. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 1/2/2022 2:35:00 AM
"Lost in the forest of my dreams" - Great! Congratulations!
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Date: 4/22/2021 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 4/17/2021 4:00:00 PM
Lovely writing. I enjoyed very much. God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 4/17/2021 8:10:00 PM
Thank you Gina. M.
Date: 4/14/2021 2:43:00 AM
I never want to leave my forest of dreams or break free of their tempting schemes, I will play in that garden forever. Hugs.
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Date: 4/11/2021 6:10:00 PM
Beautiful, Margarita ~
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 4/19/2021 1:31:00 PM
Thank you. M.

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