In the Forest of Aberdeen

The Wood Elves were summoned among the 
Greens
Your here to spread the news about the birth
Of our princess.
Her name is Josephine
She was born at eight fifteen
Was nineteen inches long and weighted in at
Six pounds 3 ounces the Queen is fine and the
King is overflowing with happiness.
The Wood Elves were summoned among the
Greens
Her eye color is aquamarine.
Later on we will have a gala with full dress.
Her name is Josephine
She was named after the mother of the Queen
For her courageousness
The Wood Elves were summoned among the 
Greens
We believe she has taken after her great great
Grandmother Irene
Seems she can see tree lights in varying degrees
So she will be able to understand the old ancient
Language which makes her even more priceless.
Her name is Josephine.
The other attribute is she will be a great go
Between
Since she is half human we believe there will be
No limit to her success. 
Now go in peace with this news release around  
The greens
Telling everyone you meet we have a princess her
Name is Josephine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 1/11/2019 4:45:00 PM
Such a lovely piece Bette, so fantasy filled piece leaving much to imagine. As a matter of interest, what's the connection with Aberdeen?
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Bette Bavington
Date: 1/11/2019 5:55:00 PM
Aberdeen to me seems like a magical place. Where all magical things can live in peace and harmony. I have quite a few poems about magical beings and things. I am glad you enjoyed this one.
Date: 12/16/2018 9:02:00 PM
How nice this is, Bette. Very beautiful fantasy type story,
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Bette Bavington
Date: 12/16/2018 9:45:00 PM
Thank you. I am glad you liked it. I have a few of them. I try to write a poem for each grandchild. One is Did You See. It is about the sorcess of the lake who helped King Arthur and the other one is a Fiery Dragon. Thank you for your visit. I hope you have a great Merry Christmas.
Date: 12/15/2018 5:29:00 AM
A beautiful villanelle Bette. I had to look up to see what kind of poem it was, but I knew it was something I did not recognize. I am assuming this is about a new granddaughter, but I could be wrong. Love it that there are faeries involved, as I picture them at each family birth, clapping and cheering for happiness and joy all along the way.
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Bette Bavington
Date: 12/16/2018 9:38:00 PM
Thank you Caren. I really enjoy doing villanelles. This is to announce another princess. The the other one I did was an invitation. I try to do some thing for each grandchild. My family is what gives me my ideas for what I write about. I hope you have a great Merry Christmas.
Date: 12/15/2018 3:54:00 AM
aww what a sweet poem Bette, I find this form so challenging to write:-) hugs Jan xx
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Bette Bavington
Date: 12/16/2018 9:17:00 PM
I really enjoy doing them. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. Thank you for the visit.
Date: 12/14/2018 11:14:00 PM
A very lovely Villanelle Bette. I am usually not of fan of this form but yours is written beautifully and I enjoyed it very much! Happy Holidays! : )
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Bette Bavington
Date: 12/16/2018 9:10:00 PM
Thank you. This one was a special one for me. I am glad you liked it. I hope you have a great Merry Christmas.
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/15/2018 3:56:00 AM
I'm with you Connie, I'm not a fan of forms with repeated lines especially the triolet but the villanelle is one I've tried several times and its quite beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx
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Bette Bavington
Date: 12/14/2018 11:27:00 PM
Thank you. I am glad you liked it. Merry Christmas. I hope you have a great one.
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