Bl Devnath Poet Rhyme

In the Fate of the Whole Universe

In the fate of the whole universe 
                                 ultimately there blue is written
                                  Early life was of full struggle 
                                        vigorously bitten 
                                      Within the time span
                                    the whole game is fixed
                                   In its continuous process
                              destruction and construction mixed
                                       Old dies new born
                                     within its vast womb 
                                  After changing everything 
                                      buries in sky’s tomb 
                                  galaxies are brightest sons
                                    earth is lovely daughter
                                for natural living here on earth 
                                    blessed with liquid water
                                   all grow and die gradually 
                                 nothing is permanent in time
                                 clear fate of whole universe
                               at end pure white will its chime 


              Written on:  27/04/2016        
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Janice Canerdy May 2, 2016 at 9:48 AM A 7 for sure, BL. Great use of personification. Janice Bl Devnath May 2, 2016 at 11:26 AM Thanks for your comment with appreciation and 7. Loved always, bl

Sandra Haight April 28, 2016 at 6:57 PM Yes, BL, there are cycles to everything, and everything has a beginning and an end, from the smallest ant to our unfathomable universe. You have expressed this very well, and I enjoyed reading your poem. 7, Sandra Bl Devnath April 29, 2016 at 10:22 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and for high rating with 7. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen April 27, 2016 at 12:54 PM - We borrow our earth - it is important to take care of it - A wonderful poem, dear friend Bl - hugs // Sun :) Bl Devnath April 28, 2016 at 10:10 AM Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your wonderful comment with credit. Loved always, bl