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In the Fate of the Whole Universe

In the fate of the whole universe ultimately there blue is written Early life was of full struggle vigorously bitten Within the time span the whole game is fixed In its continuous process destruction and construction mixed Old dies new born within its vast womb After changing everything buries in sky’s tomb galaxies are brightest sons earth is lovely daughter for natural living here on earth blessed with liquid water all grow and die gradually nothing is permanent in time clear fate of whole universe at end pure white will its chime Written on: 27/04/2016 Your Favourite Poem From AUGUST 2015 - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/2/2016 9:48:00 AM

A 7 for sure, BL. Great use of personification. Janice

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/2/2016 11:26:00 AM

Thanks for your comment with appreciation and 7. Loved always, bl

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/28/2016 6:57:00 PM

Yes, BL, there are cycles to everything, and everything has a beginning and an end, from the smallest ant to our unfathomable universe. You have expressed this very well, and I enjoyed reading your poem. 7, Sandra

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/29/2016 10:22:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and for high rating with 7. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2016 12:54:00 PM

- We borrow our earth - it is important to take care of it - A wonderful poem, dear friend Bl - hugs // Sun :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/28/2016 10:10:00 AM

Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your wonderful comment with credit. Loved always, bl