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In the Faraway

After that day I hear about you exclusively in breaking dreams they are like breaking news for people meant to be heard only by me. In Breaking Dreams I hear you're living in a stone tower by the sea, Alone, with nothing lonely without us yet in your world lost and serene. Cold in some cases sad in others the dreams support me or get me drained. In Breaking Dreams you're reaching for me After that day you died on me. A "romantic' (I think) poem by pyrgia for Giorgio Veneto's contest "In the Faraway"

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Date: 1/30/2014 3:20:00 AM
Congrats, it's fantastic and I don't say it because you happen to be my wife. I mean it, my father in law would be PROUD OF YOU!
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Date: 1/28/2014 4:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A very haunting and sad poem... But beautifully written.
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Date: 1/28/2014 6:37:00 AM
Congrats Archontoula on a fine win with this well written, intriguing piece of work! Enjoyed it so.. love, gautami
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Date: 1/27/2014 5:44:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
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Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 1/28/2014 3:45:00 AM
Thank you, Sara
Date: 1/27/2014 8:55:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem for In the faraway contest and congrats on the win,
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Date: 1/28/2014 3:46:00 AM
you're very kind, thank you