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In the Eyes of God

Our life's successes

Might be failures in God's eyes

If

Through injustice were they

Achieved!













(c)  Demetrios Trifiatis
         06 June 2016

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Bl Devnath

June 11, 2016 at 3:01 PM

Every words are coated with true colors of beautiful thought. So beautiful that after reading mind becomes still for a few seconds my lovely wise friend. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

June 6, 2016 at 11:43 PM

VERY good one, and we see these unjust successes all the time.

Demetrios Trifiatis

June 7, 2016 at 5:45 AM

Unfortunately, we do dear, Andrea! Thank you for your lovely visit!

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 6, 2016 at 2:21 PM

- Agree with you my friend - always wise words, thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

June 6, 2016 at 6:32 PM

Happy you do agree my friend, Anne-Lise! Thank you so much for your gracious comment! hugs!

Miraj Raha

June 6, 2016 at 12:31 PM

I'm in love with your monoku's Sir,this one is such a truth that be reverberated in the hearts of those who take the path of injustice to become successful.Brilliant.

Demetrios Trifiatis

June 6, 2016 at 6:35 PM

So kind of you dear friend, Miraj, to express such tender feelings for my humble writing! Thank you so much! God bless you!

Nette Onclaud

June 6, 2016 at 12:24 PM

a spiritual gem, demetrios... this a valuable saying.. huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis

June 6, 2016 at 6:37 PM

It could be a valuable saying if those who commit injustices took notice of it and start practicing it dear, nette! Thank you very much for your precious visit and comment! hugs!

The Eminent Mgk

June 6, 2016 at 10:21 AM

Your Monokus are very impressive according to their nature. But shouldn't they supposed to be without 'Punctuation' according to the form???

Demetrios Trifiatis

June 6, 2016 at 11:19 AM

Thank you my friend, MGK, that with your first visit noticed the obvious: Punctuation! You are right it should be but me I care about the essence of things not about the formality. Better to do an act of love and devotion wrongly spelled than do an absolute perfect grammatically correct but soulless writing! Thank you again and may God bless you for the service offered!