In the Deep

Waves against the sun
their swords enthused by the wind
fish dance in the rain!

Feb 10-2016

Written for the contest Haiku 102
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 11, 2016 at 9:35 PM
a fine Haiku
Hy Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 7:32 AM
Thank you..
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February 10, 2016 at 2:29 PM
Wonderful haiku with awesome imagery! A-7. Pandita
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February 11, 2016 at 11:22 AM
Thank you Pandita. I appreciate your visit. Hugs, Rahy
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