In the Court of Public Opinion

You've finally got it, just the right rhyme
   The words flow like a river, rhythmic in time
Imagery galore, knitted deftly with metaphor
   A simile here, an allusion there -- a poem to adore

You post it with aplomb, contentedly sublime
   That applause and kudos will greet your new rhyme
The thunderous roar of the silence that follows
   Hurls you back to your id, bravado rung hollow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Blown Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 3:13 PM
write to the point....yes a poem can make one want to holler "heidyho....(but)... it burns your tummy don't you know" (roger miller)
Wolf Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 3:23 PM
Whoa... Good old Roger Miller-- a real country artist, dang him!! Thanks for the trip back in time! Season's best, Gershon
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