In the Clouds

In the Clouds 

Cotton candy clouds
float on a merry-go-round
riding on horses

07/29/14 For Pd's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 10:05 AM
Noelle Thank You For replying to my comment :) LINDA
Gibson Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 8:33 PM
Congratulations, Noelle; beautiful images in this winning haiku.
Devereau Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 2:03 PM
Faye, Thank you for the nice comments and the congratulations...Noelle
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 5:22 PM
Congrats for your fine win. I love cotton candy.
Devereau Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 2:02 PM
Andrea, Thank you for the congrats...I love cotton candy too :)...Noelle
Mehta Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 5:05 AM
Lovely scene by proper images, Noelle. congrats
Devereau Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 2:01 PM
Dr. Mehta, Thank you for the nice comment and the congrats...Noelle
Nance Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 8:19 PM
Such innocent views, seeing sights are such a delight riding in the clouds. well done on your win
Devereau Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 1:59 PM
Casarah...Thanks for the nice comments...Noelle
Sietesantos Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 4:30 PM
Noelle, please accept my huge congratulations for walking away with this wonderful win in the contest! Excellent write, my friend! Well-deserved! Pandita
Devereau Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 1:58 PM
Pandita...Thanks for the nice comment and congrats...Noelle
A   Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 3:32 PM
Noelle, Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest "IN THE CLOUDS!" Take care and enjoy my blog, "Pillow Fights" If you like or have the time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Devereau Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 1:57 PM
Thank you so much for the nice win in your contest Linda...I appreciate it...Noelle
Tacito Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 1:18 PM
Beautiful! Now I want Cotton Candy...THANKS! :)
Devereau Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 5:29 PM
Hi Drake...I love cotton candy too...thanks for the nice comments...Noelle
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