In the Clouds

Sea rides in the clouds
rains itself on the land sweet;
salt waits its flow back
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 5:32 PM
The concept you presented here is splendid!!! Love that first line.
Chutani Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 6:00 AM
Thanks Andrea
Lawless Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 9:49 AM
Well done Mohan, good luck
Chutani Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 6:01 AM
Thanks John for your wishes.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 8:47 AM
Wonderful write Mohan! Good luck to u!
Chutani Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 6:01 AM
Thanks Upma. Mohan
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 8:26 AM
- Many "clouds" in haiku poems today ......... well done, Mohan! - Hope you will win with your wonderful suggestions - good luck :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Chutani Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 6:01 AM
Thanks Anne.
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