In the Cavern of My Heart

I, the stalagmite
You’re the stalactite, and I
Waiting you to fall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Joe Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 10:14 PM
Thank you guys for all your appreciations to my poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 5:14 PM
So cute an image!
Osuru Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 3:05 PM
A lovely image you've given us to read.
Gentile Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 9:06 AM
I really enjoyed the imagery created by your wonderful haiku, Vanna Joe!!
Boreham Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 4:52 AM
Interesting Haiku Vanne Joe, Looking forward to reading more ! Kindest Regards Paris-Maree
Joe Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 5:50 AM
Thanks Paris-Maree.
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