In the Bottle

exilir, space, air, 
bottle always remains full;
never find empty!


Syllable count: 5/7/5
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 29, 2014 at 6:51 PM
Mohan, so reviving... Love it...Linda
Lawless Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 7:22 PM
For some emptiness can be found in a bottle. Very interesting take on the theme, it should do well.
Chutani Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 8:40 PM
thanks John
Christensen Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 12:24 PM
Hi, this is very clever! True, a bottle is and can never be empty. I like it. :)
Chutani Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 8:41 PM
Thanks for liking it. Mohan
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