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In the Air

When at last we reached our bipedal stage we stood with fists raised in the air We bowed to the brightest stars in the sky as we worshiped both heaven and earth We chanted tales to the crescent moon as we danced to the rhythm of falling rain yet we stood with fists raised in the air till the thunder-bird crashed in the plains When bear and wolf were sacred beasts while soil and water our precious friends brought life to mouths of full belief respect for creatures throughout the land We stored the harvest and consumed the hunt praised the god of food and the lord of death yet we stood with fists raised in the air till the goddess of truth and justice appeared Primitive tribes much more advanced where family the woven fabric of life stitched tattered ends to meager means as they held out hope for all species Yet we cast aside our former faith dumped toxins for the wind to propel stole lives for seconds on the silver screen as we stood on the shore of our living hell When technology defeated philosophy we stood with a finger raised in the air flaunting our thoughtless victory over a social war - never declared

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Date: 7/19/2010 6:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2010 6:26:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Jan
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Date: 6/9/2010 2:56:00 PM
It makes me think of my Native American family, all around the world, great poem! Thanks for sharing and good job making the first round :)
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Date: 6/3/2010 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Jack. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2010 3:15:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 5/28/2010 7:06:00 PM
Jack - -Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, mj
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Date: 5/27/2010 1:59:00 PM
Needing to be said. Still a conscientious innovation, and distribution of "cosmic" will, or down right caring for common change to save humanity and the species. Paula L.
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Date: 5/25/2010 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jack. May you have many more features and may you find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2010 1:21:00 PM
Brilliant piece Jack - enjoyed reading very much, congrats on your feature. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/23/2010 4:11:00 PM
Good use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/19/2009 6:10:00 AM
What an amazing write Jack. Thank you. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/18/2009 3:28:00 PM
Very thought provoking write. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/18/2009 2:23:00 PM
Nicely written. I like the last stanza. Keep writing.
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