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In the Ageless Eyes

If all the world could see inside
            What wrinkled covers have denied
The storied life of one’s caress
                 For life and love and happiness

The inner glow remains intact
     It’s just the outside that’s been cracked 
If only they would realize
                   The key is in the ageless eyes

if not the world but one or three
            Who’d care to see what’s really me
And not a ghost of supple skin
                    Not just the wrapping I am in

Why must they underestimate  
                      Or misconstrue or underrate
The value of an older work
                Dismissing with a scornful smirk

Ironic as each page is turned
                 In every life as we have learned
The same place we shall all arrive
                         So grateful just to be alive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 7/1/2023 9:17:00 PM
Perfect penning, Mike. A neat, poetic analysis of the 'human condition.' 'Twill ever be so, I imagine. Life is a big 'cover-up,' it seems. ~ The U.N. Rapper
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/2/2023 7:20:00 AM
Thank you so much U.N. Rapper!!!
Date: 6/30/2023 10:16:00 AM
- So true ... the inside is as before .... "It’s just the outside that’s been cracked " - Lovely poem, Mike :) - Have a nice weekend :) - hugs
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/1/2023 4:24:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise xxoo
Date: 6/30/2023 9:10:00 AM
Deep thought, Mike. A poem that is not only brilliant but also creative.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/30/2023 10:09:00 AM
Thank you Victor!

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