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In the Age of Blooms

Love is the golden star in the day and night sky,
Marking lush seasons, as halcyon years go by,
Love shines all the days, and also all the nights,
In an age of sweet flowers, and purple twilights.

Twinkle twinkle moonlit, radiant love is in bloom;
And under vaulted skies, milky stars are strewn.
Warmly beams noon, then hued florescent dark,
And in amber afternoons, lovers in verdant parks.
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Zahid Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 3:57 AM
A cute love poem. Very well penned. Blessings Evelyn
Buehler Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 8:21 AM
Thank you very much, Paghunda. Blessings.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 1:17 AM
Lovely poem, adorable and succinct.
Buehler Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 8:21 AM
Thanks so much. :)
Wolf Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 7:56 PM
This love poem simply sparkles, Evelyn. I adore it. Also, I think it is exactly the right length. (Some poems with love as a focus can get a little long-winded.) This is going right into my FAVES. Thank you! :) gw
Buehler Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 8:25 PM
You are most welcome. I am so honored by your glowing words of appreciation, and by your FAVE, Gershon. Thank you so very much. :) Evelyn
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