Paulette Calasibetta Poet Haiku

In Stillness - Hiku

somber stillness

                                        hangs softly

                             gathering scattered memories









    For: Hiku (Disciplined Brevity) Poetry Contest
    Date: 11/19/21
    Sponsor: William Kekaula 
    Syllables: 15 total(4,3,8)

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Krish Radhakrishna November 29, 2021 at 4:17 PM Superb! a winner!! well done! Paulette Calasibetta November 30, 2021 at 3:03 PM Thank you Krish for your stopping by to comment. Blessings, Paulette

Delice Arleen Skelly November 21, 2021 at 2:22 AM Nicely done Paulette...Delice Paulette Calasibetta November 21, 2021 at 8:38 AM As always, thank you for stopping by. Blessings, Paulette

Mike Bayles November 19, 2021 at 4:28 PM Paulette, your hiku is wonderful and true to life. Paulette Calasibetta November 19, 2021 at 4:51 PM Thanks Mike....memories are always an inspiration,aren't they? Blessings, Paulette

Anselmo Boles November 19, 2021 at 3:44 PM This tells me that when uncluttered thoughts wander, almost forgotten scenes reappear. Well done P.C.!...ab Paulette Calasibetta November 19, 2021 at 4:05 PM Thank you AB~I appreciate you stopping by my page. Blessings, Paulette

Regina Mcintosh November 19, 2021 at 12:51 PM Beautiful - I love it. God bless you friend. Love, Gina Paulette Calasibetta November 19, 2021 at 1:51 PM Gina, so glad you enjoyed it....I thought it was impactful. Blessings, Paulette

Jan Allison November 19, 2021 at 12:46 PM beautiful in its sadness hugs jan xx Paulette Calasibetta November 19, 2021 at 1:50 PM Thank you Jan for stopping by to comment. Blessings, Paulette

Darlene De Beaulieu November 19, 2021 at 12:06 PM Hello Paulette, yes stillness does gathers memories. Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu November 20, 2021 at 11:16 AM Hello Paulette, you are welcome my fridnd. Blessings. Paulette Calasibetta November 19, 2021 at 1:49 PM Thanks for stopping by ~ Blessings, Paulette