In Stars Above

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06/19/25

This or That vol.

Fourtt Place

Contest by Edward Ibeh

     My dreams are to swim in stars above.
      Just to gaze  at starry sky :I love.
     Wonderful blue sapphires to twinkle 
     like clusters of pretty periwinkles.

     In charcoal night solemn solitude
     stays in serene sublime placid mood.
     Phases of Moon not that important 
     Tapestry of stars always to enchant.

      From garden comes jasmine aroma.
      Up above starry panorama 
      Pristine peace , I can feel as best bliss.
      Flashed sweetest memory of first kiss.

      Hazy silhouette spreads on Milky Way .
      Cosmic glaze of distant stars to sway
       with reminiscence of  my amour ! Though
       long lost : Only despondency to glow.

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