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Poem written for and submitted to “A Romantic or Celestial Crystalline Poetry Contest,” Tania Kitchin, sponsor, September 7, 2025.

IN STARDUST TRAILS

IN STARDUST TRAILS ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ fiery tear across celestial sails whispers your name in stardust trails
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Parker Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 3:49 PM
"Like God striking a match across the sky...Arthur Prysock"
Gauthier Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 4:36 AM
beautiful ~
Poet Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 3:02 AM
These two lines, penned by you, dear Sara, are just breathtaking.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:07 PM
oh, your comments are so thoughtful! I'm deeply touched and grateful, hugs from Texas, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 8:10 PM
Fiery tear…unique!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:07 PM
wow, thank you!
Achara Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 6:03 PM
Very nice. I love it!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:08 PM
glad you liked it, Chetta. Appreciate your visit today, hugs, Sara
Rose  Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 4:50 PM
this has got to be the most beautiful 2 lines, every written Sara, gl
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:08 PM
awww, what a wonderful thing to say. thank you, dearest Rose, hugs, Sara
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