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In Spring's Warmth

in spring's warmth nearby a drifting stream. . . my thoughts ripple March 6, 2018 for Mick Talbot's haiku, theme: WATER Contest

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Susan Gentry

Date: 4/3/2018 7:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this amazing haiku. I love Haiku's and this is brilliant.

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/3/2018 3:19:00 PM

Hello Andrea, great rippling right good write tonight, today whatever is better hey hey hey.'

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 4/3/2018 10:57:00 AM

What a clever haiku!

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/3/2018 9:21:00 AM

Back with more congrats, Andrea.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/12/2018 9:46:00 AM

A very lovely haiku, Andrea, especially the correlation between the 2nd and 3rd line. Regards // paul

Jack Horne

Date: 3/10/2018 10:27:00 AM

very clever indeed - love it

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 3/9/2018 11:50:00 AM

Really beautiful haiku! Thanks for sharing! My thoughts are about to ripple here in montreal!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/9/2018 9:07:00 AM

I'm so bad, the wiring in brain is specifically bad. My 1st response to this has me giggling, 'and harden nipples.' Oh, what is wrong with me? This is a great Haiku, I have no idea why I giggled, I truly thought (serious now) it had a wow impact. I know it will do well unless the sponsor also lays in gutters. Love ... CayCay

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/8/2018 8:40:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, Andrea! Congrats on your win :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/8/2018 7:56:00 PM

Congrats!!!

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/8/2018 3:08:00 PM

Love this one Andrea, congratulations...

Jan Allison

Date: 3/8/2018 12:45:00 PM

Many congrats on your win Andrea i loved this the first time I read it:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/8/2018 10:48:00 AM

Lovely, Andrea. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/8/2018 8:58:00 AM

Love your Haiku, Andrea. Congrats on your First place win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

John Lawless

Date: 3/8/2018 7:50:00 AM

Well done Andrea...fantastic last line...each though a ripple....

Mick Talbot

Date: 3/8/2018 7:38:00 AM

Oh yes, liked to the extent of giving it a first place on the podium, congratulations Andrea... Mick

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/8/2018 7:31:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea,well deserved win.

Silent One

Date: 3/8/2018 6:01:00 AM

Nice imagery Andrea, I think Mick will like this one..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/7/2018 9:22:00 PM

So very lovely...and so they do, as we enjoy nature!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/7/2018 6:32:00 PM

Excellent haiku Andrea. : )

Joseph May

Date: 3/7/2018 7:46:00 AM

Beautiful haiku Andrea..best wishes..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/7/2018 5:41:00 AM

- Lovely written, Andrea - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/6/2018 6:19:00 PM

very lovely, andrea! great ending...

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/6/2018 5:50:00 PM

I can hear the water trickle so sweetly inked! I love it. My best to you in the contest! xomo!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/6/2018 5:44:00 PM

Hi Andrea, a wonderful Haiku springs forth from your pen. I love the thought shared by your words. This Haiku joins the others in my fave. I really hope it does well for you in the contest. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX I could wax lyrical on your Haiku a lot longer but one word says it all for me, Excellent.