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In Spring's Warmth

in spring's warmth

nearby a drifting stream. . .

my thoughts ripple

waterhaiku

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Susan Gentry

April 3, 2018 at 7:38 PM

Congratulations on your win with this amazing haiku. I love Haiku's and this is brilliant.

Joe Maverick

April 3, 2018 at 3:19 PM

Hello Andrea, great rippling right good write tonight, today whatever is better hey hey hey.'

Dale Gregory Cozart

April 3, 2018 at 10:57 AM

What a clever haiku!

Line Gauthier

April 3, 2018 at 9:21 AM

Back with more congrats, Andrea.

Paul Callus

March 12, 2018 at 9:46 AM

A very lovely haiku, Andrea, especially the correlation between the 2nd and 3rd line. Regards // paul

Jack Horne

March 10, 2018 at 10:27 AM

very clever indeed - love it

Kyle Kriticos

March 9, 2018 at 11:50 AM

Really beautiful haiku! Thanks for sharing! My thoughts are about to ripple here in montreal!

CayCay Godwin

March 9, 2018 at 9:07 AM

I'm so bad, the wiring in brain is specifically bad. My 1st response to this has me giggling, 'and harden nipples.' Oh, what is wrong with me? This is a great Haiku, I have no idea why I giggled, I truly thought (serious now) it had a wow impact. I know it will do well unless the sponsor also lays in gutters. Love ... CayCay

Laura Leiser

March 8, 2018 at 8:40 PM

Beautiful haiku, Andrea! Congrats on your win :)

Kim Rodrigues

March 8, 2018 at 7:56 PM

Congrats!!!

Charlie Smith

March 8, 2018 at 3:08 PM

Love this one Andrea, congratulations...

Jan Allison

March 8, 2018 at 12:45 PM

Many congrats on your win Andrea i loved this the first time I read it:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

March 8, 2018 at 10:48 AM

Lovely, Andrea. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Sandra Haight

March 8, 2018 at 8:58 AM

Love your Haiku, Andrea. Congrats on your First place win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

John Lawless

March 8, 2018 at 7:50 AM

Well done Andrea...fantastic last line...each though a ripple....

Mick Talbot

March 8, 2018 at 7:38 AM

Oh yes, liked to the extent of giving it a first place on the podium, congratulations Andrea... Mick

Tom Cunningham

March 8, 2018 at 7:31 AM

Congratulations Andrea,well deserved win.

Silent One

March 8, 2018 at 6:01 AM

Nice imagery Andrea, I think Mick will like this one..

Kim Rodrigues

March 7, 2018 at 9:22 PM

So very lovely...and so they do, as we enjoy nature!

Connie Marcum Wong

March 7, 2018 at 6:32 PM

Excellent haiku Andrea. : )

Joseph May

March 7, 2018 at 7:46 AM

Beautiful haiku Andrea..best wishes..

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 7, 2018 at 5:41 AM

- Lovely written, Andrea - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer

March 6, 2018 at 6:19 PM

very lovely, andrea! great ending...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 6, 2018 at 5:50 PM

I can hear the water trickle so sweetly inked! I love it. My best to you in the contest! xomo!

Vladislav Raven

March 6, 2018 at 5:44 PM

Hi Andrea, a wonderful Haiku springs forth from your pen. I love the thought shared by your words. This Haiku joins the others in my fave. I really hope it does well for you in the contest. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX I could wax lyrical on your Haiku a lot longer but one word says it all for me, Excellent.

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