Be very careful when watching the progression of the eclipse today.
In Solar Eclipse By Franklin Price 8/21/2017 In Solar eclipse, the moon will block out the sun Don't look without glasses, good solar ones Will damage your eyes and the retina there Make you go blind, if you continue to stare Will be very dim when solar glass worn Don't remove them when bright, or your eyes will be torn When eclipse becomes total, so you only see moon You make look with bare eyes, but don't look too soon As soon as the sun sneaks a peek 'round the moon Put the glasses back on, better not late than soon Don't be a fool and think your eyes won't be hurt I've written this poem so you'll be on alert
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