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In Sleep's Deep Silent

A rare amber glow shines each night. In sleep's deep silence, a pure light Pierces heaven, downward gaze, With a brilliant starry ray. Rich in spiritual love, He will answer from above. A rare amber glow shines each night In sleep's deep silence, a pure light. By Connie Gildersleeve 07/13/2013 For Nette Onclaud's contest, "Stardust in an Octelle"

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Sandra Adams

Date: 8/25/2013 6:04:00 PM

what a beauty this one is...loved it!

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 8/20/2013 1:28:00 PM

An awesome poem. It is a treat to read it. Thanks Connie for admiring my winning poem My Pen and for your felicitations. Regards. -Mohammad

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 8/12/2013 4:59:00 PM

What a charming little poem. I like everything about it!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 8/12/2013 5:08:00 PM

Thank you for your delightful comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Roger Hadden

Date: 8/6/2013 2:43:00 PM

A very beautiful poem, and thank you Connie for the nice review of my poetry. Roger Dale Hadden

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 8/7/2013 9:14:00 AM

River thank you for the visit and comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Benjamin David

Date: 8/5/2013 1:47:00 AM

Wonderfully sumptuous. Well done, Connie.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 8/5/2013 4:28:00 PM

Thank you for your fabulous comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/28/2013 6:52:00 AM

I see I am not the only one who appreciates your visits and encouraging comments.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 8/5/2013 4:56:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/16/2013 4:30:00 PM

A beautifully written and well thought out piece. Beautiful imagery.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 7/16/2013 5:13:00 PM

Carol thank you for your lovely comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/16/2013 4:39:00 AM

i mentioned how lovely this piece is through my blog, connie... special cheers to you!...SOUP MAIL..:)

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 7/16/2013 5:14:00 PM

Thank you, but I'm not sure if understand the error in my verse. Warm Smiles, Connie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/15/2013 10:26:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 7/16/2013 5:15:00 PM

Sara thank you for your lovely comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

... Gigno

Date: 7/15/2013 12:30:00 AM

!!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/14/2013 10:23:00 AM

soup mail...:) huggs

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 7/15/2013 6:37:00 AM

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2013 12:56:00 AM

wow, a very lovely spiritual one this is, Connie. I bet Nette will love YOURS.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 7/15/2013 6:38:00 AM

Thank you Andrea the lovely comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/14/2013 12:05:00 AM

This is a wonderful and enlightening write my friend! I totally loved reading this glorious poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, such a harmonious poem, Great Work!! PS my family were in a major car accident a couple of nights ago! We have been dealing with injuries of the crash, though not severe! It is amazing that the injuries were so minimal, it's because the airbags saved their lives! In case I don't comment on your poetry for a few days you know why! I'm behind...Thanks!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 7/15/2013 6:40:00 AM

Russell I hope all are healing well from the accident. Warm Smiles, Connie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/13/2013 7:03:00 PM

An interesting form done very well Light & Love

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 7/15/2013 6:41:00 AM

Debbie thank you for the lovely comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Joseph May

Date: 7/13/2013 12:58:00 PM

wonderful write Connie...best wishes

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 7/13/2013 2:37:00 PM

Somehow I missed a line in my verse and had to do a little rewrite, but thank you for your visit and comment Joseph. Warm Smiles, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/13/2013 11:07:00 AM

- Ohhh ... so beautiful Connie - Wish you luck in the contest, hope you will win. - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 7/13/2013 2:41:00 PM

Some how I missed an entire line in my poem and with a couple of changes made, it ready to be read, but thank you for your visit and comment Anne. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie