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In Simplicity

Waking every day in this place so full of grace and purity such true beauty I see things in a peaceful way touching each day always with love sent from above And as I fall asleep at night my dreams take flight and in my heart hope won't depart _____________ * Thoughts from the Heart * Form ~ Minute Poetry The Minute Poem is rhyming verse form consisting of 12 lines of 60 syllables written in strict iambic meter. The poem is formatted into 3 stanzas of 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables.

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Joseph May

Date: 2/2/2024 7:03:00 AM

I like the theme of beauty and peace in this write as your hope remains strong, Lovely verse Brandy, hugs

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/2/2024 7:33:00 PM

Yes, hope does remain strong. You're so kind, Joseph. I appreciate your lovely comment. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Watt

Date: 2/22/2020 1:09:00 AM

Brandy, the spiritual nature of this quiets my soul. Purity, beauty, grace, peace, and hope all sing their gentle lullaby ~ John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/22/2020 8:47:00 PM

I enjoyed writing this, using this form. Thank you John. May peace always surround you. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 7/30/2018 12:41:00 PM

Peaceful is an apt way of describing the mood you manage to create with your beautiful poetry.Thank you Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/30/2018 2:03:00 PM

:) Thank you SYLVIA. I am happy that you enjoyed this peaceful poem of mine. ~ Brandy

Mark Toney

Date: 7/29/2018 9:31:00 PM

Brandy, this poem is lovely, and it’s calm, peaceful message of hope resonates with me. This is my first exposure to the Minute poem. I’m going to try it one day soon. You should submit it to the Soup so it can be included in our poetry selections :)

Mark Toney
Date: 7/29/2018 10:32:00 PM

Brandy, to submit a new type of poetry, simply select “Contact Us” from the menu at the bottom of the page. Fill in your email address. The subject line is a drop-down menu. Select “Add New Form of Poetry” for the subject. Type in your message and then send.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/29/2018 9:43:00 PM

I am not sure how to submit this form here at Poetry Soup. I appreciate your kind words and thoughts. Thank you Mark. I am happy that you felt peace around these words of mine. :) Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/28/2018 8:30:00 AM

A clever name and interesting form.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/28/2018 10:58:00 AM

Thank you Richard. It is a fun form. Simplicity lingers around moments. My heart smiles knowing this fact. :) Brandy

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/26/2018 7:45:00 PM

Brandy, I love the beauty of your poem in this graceful and lovely form. A splendid title as well. I truly enjoyed your inspiring write this evening.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/26/2018 10:19:00 PM

Thank you Susan. Your thoughts mean so much. I appreciate you and your kindness. May you have a wonderful evening. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 7/26/2018 4:36:00 AM

Your minute poem leaves me with a peaceful easy feeling, Brandy, a very nice way to start my day. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/26/2018 10:49:00 AM

Thank you John. I appreciate you and your kind words. This is a very easy form. I am sure you will create a masterpiece when you try it. May you have a wonderful day. :) Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 7/26/2018 7:32:00 AM

Brandy, I like this form as well. I had not heard of it but I found it defined in Shadow Poetry; I will try it some time. J