In Silence Sat An Hourglass

In silence sat an hourglass,
never faultering from it's place,
it was void of every concious thing,
A reflection for a face,
I felt it's weight upon my back,
and for this I could not rest,
at times I tried to trick that glass,
it just put me to the test,
for every time I stop some sand,
some other sand would fall,
and the more I tried the more I lied,
I could never stop it all,
so with pain and anger I grabbed that glass,
and stared into it's face,
and with pain and anger it just stared back,
as the sand fell into place....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 10, 2013 at 9:54 AM
Bryan, a nice little winning poem in Michael's dreaming into the bay contest... xox~ LINDA
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June 20, 2013 at 12:21 PM
Hi Linda thank you for your complement and ecouragement, I hope things are going good for you have a excellent day......Bryan,k
Dietrich Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 3:03 PM
wow, a very interesting poem. I love the way you took this topic and did something so unique. Congrats.
Dueck Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 1:44 PM
Thank you Andrea for your complement, hope you have a great day....B.kris
Delaney Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 10:23 AM
A wonderful analogy of trying to hold back time and your form flowed like sand in an hourglass. Congratulations on this fine winning poem. SuZ
A   Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 11:14 PM
wow... Bryan, the imagery sat there with the hourglass...i enjoyed the way you ended the poem.... great expressions... Linda
Dueck Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 1:45 PM
Thank you for your complement I'm glad you enjoyed this poem thanks....B. kris
Van Breda Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 7:17 AM
Great write. I love the use of 'Allegory' you so accurately penned here. Thanks for stopping by my poems.
Longfall Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 7:33 PM
Very well done. This poem flowed smoothly from start to finish. Great job maintaining the tempo. Nice write!
Dueck Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 1:46 PM
Thanks have a great day....kris
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