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In Search of Goldilocks

eye to telescope all night long, she looks for the Goldilocks zone, her young new husband six foot strong, desires her soft flesh on her bone! married in love just few weeks back, astronomy gets attention, muscular torso full six pack, from her gets no passing mention! passions are different when young, for her extra terrestrial, being male hormones flushed, well hung, his plans more territorial! late one night exhausted from her search she said “ you know Goldilocks zone?” “Not G zone”! he said from his perch, “can show you G spot when alone!” Thanks to the weather in England, cloudy nights came to his rescue, he shows her stars now with his wand, she is in Goldilocks zone new!
Written 18/March/2021 Goldilocks zone poetry competition Anthony Biaanco sponsored 8 syllables each line 5 quatrains!

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Date: 3/18/2021 9:29:00 AM
I like your poem, Krish. It kind of saunters toward the erotic...interesting. Interesting how you mingled astronomy (Goldilocks Zone) into the male/female conundrum.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/18/2021 11:54:00 AM
Thanks Milton! i appreciate your visit and your kind feedback! wanted to write something different from planets!
Date: 3/18/2021 2:56:00 AM
Love the humour Krish, there will be many cloudy nights if our weather forecast is anything to go by. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/18/2021 5:55:00 AM
thanks Tom! Yes, astronomy is hard work in England. Scotland is good!

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