In Reverse

Time and time again we talk about the guy
And people look at the females as if they are so high
Its plain and simple you can see it with your own eye
But their beauty and personality makes us look right by
Then the next thing you know the guys heart is left out to dry

The sweet, innocent, kind gentle female
They pay attention to every single detail
We try to size them up and put them on a scale
But at the end of the day the female will always prevail

The male race is beat down and put to disgrace
Laughed at if he is soft and fingers pointed in his face
A stalker maybe not really just because he likes to chase
Then days to minutes and minutes to seconds he has been replaced

The sneakiness of a female is an art
If you don’t pay close attention to them they will break your heart
A guy’s heart can be broken at the end or even from the start
Too strong to admit our pain and hurt we think we’re smart

Females are at times worse then us as they lie and cheat
The difference is that they don’t talk they are discreet
Even when we think the relationship is at a whole and complete
The female’s mind looks back on her ex and thinks revenge shall be sweet
Getting revenge on the wrong person should be obsolete

The male gender has more then what is seen
When we start out our girlfriend is are only queen
No matter what we will break up with you before we decided to become un-clean
Until that one girl comes along breaks us down and doesn’t even leave a vaccine

We now have the sickness that was given to us
It’s a horrible and contagious flu
Next thing you know it settles in and we can no longer be true
We cheat and lie and get what we want is what we pursue
We now run the streets wild and no when we look at a female we have a new view

We go to the doctor we even go to the nurse
They tell use there is no cure and this flu will only get worse
Going back and forth it cant be a sickness it has to be a curse
So before you females want to criticize and judge reach into your very own purse
And just know what your about to pull out and say think about it in reverse

©Jeremy Fennell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/24/2010 10:40:00 AM
Please continue to share your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Thanksgiving Jeremy. Love, Carol
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