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Writing Challenge - U or V words - Poetry Contest, Constance La France. Date: 08/12/2023

                   We're known to 
                Waste time coveting 
               Things we can't have.
     We mortgage our castles in the air  
            Pursue illusions, rainbows...

            That yield no pot of gold,
              As opposed to waiting 
          For these elusive butterflies 
      To organically alight on our palm.
              In our dogged pursuit,

          We recklessly trample upon 
             Our flower beds, leaving 
            Bloomed flowers in ruins.
          You let be those butterflies 
                   You can't trap... 

             Inside your clenched fist.
         Exercise patience, they'll come
             On their own time, if not,
         They're not meant to be yours.
        Instead, pause and watch them 

                Float with abandon
         Over your manicured garden.
                Visually trace them 
              From flower to flower;
               Admire their beauty...

               Until they quietly flit
                  A     w     a     y;
                  They're visitors 
                 Not meant to be 
                       Caught

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Date: 8/25/2023 11:55:00 AM
Amazing perceptive write, Edward! You articulate with eloquence the metaphor of the butterflies! Congratulations on your win! I think this is one of your best. Blessings to you and your family!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/2/2023 11:32:00 AM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback, visit and congratulations, Sam:-)
Date: 8/18/2023 2:38:00 AM
Great subject choice and elegantly executed; congratulations
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/18/2023 4:19:00 AM
Thank you very much, Terry:-)
Date: 8/16/2023 11:03:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Edward :) -(Hope the baby is doing well :) - hugs
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/18/2023 4:19:00 AM
She is, Anne-Lise:-) Thank you so much for the feedback and congratulations!
Date: 8/14/2023 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your write. Have a great day with your win............
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/17/2023 3:43:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Date: 8/13/2023 2:42:00 PM
oh I just love this one. you chose a great concept to work with , Edward. Congrats on the win
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Date: 8/12/2023 11:30:00 AM
Lovely poem and free the butterflies. Nice, Edward :)
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Date: 8/12/2023 6:14:00 AM
Nice one Ed
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Date: 8/12/2023 5:22:00 AM
Lovely metaphoric poem, Edward. Yes indeed--let those butterflies be! I like the message of your poem.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/17/2023 3:43:00 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

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