In Praise of a Kimo

We move like cats through the tall meadow grass
Searching for something we lost
Only to find ourselves


contest In Praise of a Kimo..visual 3
Frederic Parker..2/16/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Squyres Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 10:37 AM
No photo image needed here... I prefer the image and message I get from your kimo. Well done !!! Congrats !!
Nance Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 4:26 PM
I do like this, short and sweet, your poem feels complete. Grats on your contest placement :)
Allison Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 7:50 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Frederic:-) Hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 3:25 PM
wow, I really like how you did yours. frankly, I am not seeing too many that i like as much as the way you did yours.
Callus Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 3:03 AM
Excellent...I love it!! No need for a visual here. Well done Frederic. #7 // paul
Lawless Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 5:08 PM
Frederic, this could be a metaphor for life...
Pinet Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 1:05 PM
Your words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your imagination and talent. Well done Emile. #7
Andresen Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 12:17 PM
- Yes, it is often true - I wish you best of luck in the contest with this gem Frederic ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 12:05 PM
Beautifully creative Frederic good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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