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In Plain View

Like a rusty old car, in plain view.
Me, unseen by you.


12/22/11
Received 1st place in "YOUR VERSE AGAIN any theme/any form max of 12 lines" contest

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Kash Poet

March 4, 2012 at 10:56 AM

Congrats Susan on your win.This is very nice.

Wilma Neels

March 4, 2012 at 8:44 AM

Susan, congratulations on your win in Rick's contest :)

Bob Quigley

March 4, 2012 at 8:26 AM

Very succinct Susan. Congratulations

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 4, 2012 at 6:32 AM

Congratulations on your win with this excellent piece Susan. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

March 3, 2012 at 9:40 PM

SUSAN, Congratulations with your wonderful entry IN RICK'S CONTEST ;-) well done~ALWAYS PD*

Bob Quigley

February 7, 2012 at 10:14 PM

Like it Susan. Congrats

Andrea Dietrich

February 7, 2012 at 7:42 PM

WOW, first place, Susan. many got first place this time. I'm so happy you are on the list. Congratulations.

Jon Arno

February 7, 2012 at 5:09 PM

Congratulations on a great write and a terrific win. Jon

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 11, 2012 at 7:51 AM

I am stopping by to thank you for sharing your poetry with us Susan. I would also like to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

December 24, 2011 at 10:07 PM

No new poems from ya, girlie!! guess I will just get back upstairs. I bet there is very little action here on Xmas Eve. Nightie Night. Hope Santa brings you something very nice for your stocking!! Luv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

December 24, 2011 at 9:46 PM

Susan... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.

Ilene Bauer

December 23, 2011 at 7:59 AM

clean, concise and very nice!

Andrea Dietrich

December 22, 2011 at 11:37 PM

AWWW, shucks, Susan You ain't no rusty car!!! haha. GOOD way to do the contest. So short. I hope I can be that clever. I'm gonna check out a few things and then get off here!

The Situation

December 22, 2011 at 7:28 PM

i don't look for beautiful and i dont look for clean, i dont look for stuck up, and i don't look for mean. so let me be the judge of what i might notice. i might be the freak but you did'nt know this.