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simplistic yes, robotic yes, curroptive indeed, unnecessary absolutely, \ final frontier evolve into mechanics class polastic people yes ok sorry hung like a doorknob canoe lips and trees in boxes obnoxious?ceiling breeze elevator goes up door opens women talk business and then hush when they see me chester old fellow the teacher chester the teacher anything ringing a bell bird talkin wheel spinin button pushin lip smacken phone callen head scratchin and all the silence in between heres to giving this to you tender love and care to all

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Date: 7/29/2010 8:02:00 PM
thanks Carol and Sidney and P.D and Sweetheart, and does anyone know what form i could "label" this as??
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Date: 7/29/2010 1:06:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your very creative write tonight.. with luv..
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Date: 7/29/2010 11:02:00 AM
Welcome to the soup. Very interesting read. More please
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Date: 7/29/2010 5:51:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Cordale. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/28/2010 9:02:00 PM
Nice one, enjoyed..P.D.
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Date: 7/28/2010 9:02:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... so enjoyed reading your very creative write to night.. with luv..
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