In Place of News

simplistic yes, robotic
yes, curroptive indeed, unnecessary absolutely, \
final frontier evolve into mechanics class 
polastic people
yes ok sorry
hung like a doorknob
canoe lips and trees in boxes
obnoxious?ceiling breeze
elevator goes up
door opens
women talk business
and then hush when they see me
chester old fellow 
the teacher
chester the teacher
anything ringing a bell
bird talkin
wheel spinin
button pushin
lip smacken
phone callen
head scratchin
and all the silence in between
heres to giving this to
you 
tender love and care
to all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Contreras Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 8:02 PM
thanks Carol and Sidney and P.D and Sweetheart, and does anyone know what form i could "label" this as??
Sweetheart Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 1:06 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your very creative write tonight.. with luv..
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 11:02 AM
Welcome to the soup. Very interesting read. More please
Brown Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 5:51 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Cordale. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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July 28, 2010 at 9:02 PM
Nice one, enjoyed..P.D.
Sweetheart Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 9:02 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... so enjoyed reading your very creative write to night.. with luv..
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