In Place

I’m not the type to lose things 
And I hope that doesn’t change,
Although sometimes as we age
What’s in our minds may rearrange.

If everything gets put in place
Right after we have used it,
It should be there when needed next
(Unless our brains confused it).

For those who toss possessions
Every time in different spots, 
Finding items might be like 
A much less fun connect-the-dots.

But for neatniks or obsessives,
It becomes a little game.
Every shelf or drawer or closet
Day by day remains the same.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 1:53 AM
I am the opposite of this "for neatniks or obsessives," But I am tripping over junk now, so I may have to lean toward the light side.
M  Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 2:45 AM
Hi ilene …great poem and very relatable! Debx
Wolf Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 12:52 PM
'From Neatnik to Nudnik' - The Life Story of ___________. (Fill in the Blank). lol. Thanks, Ilene, and may you have good health and happiness this year! Blessings and Bounty, Gershon
Slaughter Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 11:28 AM
I'm not a very good housekeeper, but I am neat. It's just that things often look a bit different under a layer...or two...of dust. As usual, Ilene, a fun read.
Leffanta Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 11:07 AM
My late wife kept an immaculate home for which I shall always be grateful! As I was on a contingency unit which must go anywhere in the world on a moment's notice, it was imperative I could get dressed and leave silently in the dark, and my daughter is very proud she acquired those techniques. Worked great for us, though others love hide 'n seek! Enjoyed, Ilene! Aloha!
Hankins Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 7:43 PM
Wow! You described me to a "T," Ilene. In my house, everything has a place and there is a place for everything. If I go to find something where it should be and it is not there I panic! I put my keys inside my cap, so they are always there. I never go out without putting on my cap! But, I don't think I'm compulsive...may be, who knows?
Kyser Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 4:50 PM
I’m ‘fraid I end up in a hunt And sometimes I just have to punt Thats likely why I have two tapes, Three shovels, four hammers and five rakes
Hankins Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 7:43 PM
LOL!
Gauthier Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 2:14 PM
Sweet, Ilene. I can certainly relate ~
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