Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

In Our Prime

A time for us when we were young,                                                            
love would roll off the tongue.                                                                  
Youth gave us all the time,                                                                         
that was when we were in our prime. 

Date Written: 9/23/2020                                                                                    Original Poem: A Time For Us                                                                 
Rithimus Divisa 6 Poetry Contest                                                       
Sponsored by: Gregory R Barden

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Gershon Wolf September 23, 2020 at 8:28 PM Nice summary of what seemed eternal back then, and now is so terribly fleeting. Evanescent Florescence, Gershon Paula Goldsmith September 24, 2020 at 10:23 AM Thanks for your notes. Where did all the time/years go???? Glad you like this one. Enjoy your day....................

Sam Kauffman September 23, 2020 at 11:12 AM The hope of youth entwined with wistful melancholy all wrapped up into your wonderful entry for Gregory's contest. Best of luck for the contest my friend. Hope you are doing well! Paula Goldsmith September 23, 2020 at 1:17 PM Thank You, for your note and good luck. I guess, I am OK. Some days I wonder. Hope you are OK. Enjoy your day................

Anne-Lise Andresen September 23, 2020 at 10:07 AM - "... in our prime ... in our prime ... " ... I have to repeat the words twice ... sounds so long ago ... :)))) - Lovely written, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest: ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paula Goldsmith September 23, 2020 at 10:51 AM Thanks for your note and best wishes. You are so right, it was a long time ago. About 3 lives ago. Enjoy your day with a hug.....................