Get Your Premium Membership

In Our Bones

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like David Crandall.


2/8/2025 for Embodying the light Poetry Contest sponsored by Unseeking Seeker

It seems we always know what's right, and how to treat ourselves and others. So, why, I wonder, is it our plight to harm ourselves and our brothers. How do we ever bridge the gap between what we know and what we do? Is there a guide or a map, to show the pathway to pursue? Meditation, faith, what is it that bestows what our ideal owns? So, our actions show we know it, not in our brains, but in our bones.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/8/2025 12:47:00 PM
Good poem with a great last line, speaks of restoration of faith. I enjoy reading this poetic gem.
Login to Reply
Crandall Avatar
David Crandall
Date: 2/8/2025 5:53:00 PM
Thanks Hilda!
Date: 2/8/2025 12:32:00 PM
Aww love this David….well stated and great rhyming! Debx
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things