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In One Peace

I am afraid I am in too deep You have taken off my head And now you ask me for my heart Are we connected By more than my imagination As I sit contemplating I am searching for a direction Who what when where How do I get out of here In one peace

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Audrey Haick

Date: 10/24/2011 9:39:00 AM

I love your Prose, Brian. Well written but I'm afraid once she's got your head and heart, you are in too deep. : ) Good job. I think you meant, "piece" at the end. Have a beautiful week! Love, Annalise

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2011 5:55:00 AM

I am so happy to see the Soup back up and thrilled to be able to read your wonderful poetry Brian. May you have an exciting week filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol

Kj Hooten

Date: 10/23/2011 10:54:00 PM

Hopefully you are playing with the words and meant 'into deep' instead of 'in too deep' as well as getting out of here in one 'peace' instead of 'in one piece' It's hard to tell with this one poem. I do like the idea of love and peace.. as versus love and war...