Brian Kilpatrick Poet Prose Poetry

In One Peace

I am afraid I am in too deep
You have taken off my head
And now you ask me for my heart
Are we connected 
By more than my imagination 
As I sit contemplating
I am searching for a direction 
Who what when where
How do I get out of here 
In one peace

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Audrey Haick October 24, 2011 at 9:39 AM I love your Prose, Brian. Well written but I'm afraid once she's got your head and heart, you are in too deep. : ) Good job. I think you meant, "piece" at the end. Have a beautiful week! Love, Annalise

Carol Sunshine Brown October 24, 2011 at 5:55 AM I am so happy to see the Soup back up and thrilled to be able to read your wonderful poetry Brian. May you have an exciting week filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol

Kj Hooten October 23, 2011 at 10:54 PM Hopefully you are playing with the words and meant 'into deep' instead of 'in too deep' as well as getting out of here in one 'peace' instead of 'in one piece' It's hard to tell with this one poem. I do like the idea of love and peace.. as versus love and war...