Carrie Richards Poet Verse

In Negative Light

One moment east of twilight
Shadows outdistance the sun
Sharpening peaks and hallows,
Honed against the sparks of light.
Deep in the brow of the silence
I stand to watch the moonrise,
Overtaken by the dark





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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 21, 2014 at 11:21 PM Incredible, Carrie! Congrats on taking the top spot!!

Brenda Meier-Hans November 16, 2014 at 1:52 PM Congratulations Carrie. Once again a beautiful poem.

Sara Kendrick November 16, 2014 at 1:51 PM I am sure that Nette liked this one for it is very much like what she writes..Way to go ..Congrats on this delightful win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich November 16, 2014 at 11:57 AM wowowow, definitely this belonged at the TOP. Excellent work. Congrats, Carrie.

Frederic Parker November 16, 2014 at 10:20 AM I see how this won, discriptive and well written..congratulations

Sandra Haight November 16, 2014 at 9:41 AM Carrie, congratulations on your 1st place win on your lovely poem that is so full of imagery. Sandra

Nette Onclaud November 15, 2014 at 4:34 PM packed with imagery and deep substance... I knew this would top the list, carrie... thanks for joining my contest with my resounding congrats!

Jan Allison November 15, 2014 at 7:29 AM Absolutely beautiful Carrie many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty November 15, 2014 at 2:53 AM All are encrypted by silence before world explodes and conflicts begin. Great XXXX RAJAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 9, 2014 at 10:54 AM Wow that's a lovely Heptagonet Carrie! Gl in contest my friend !