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In Nature's Sanctuary

Blue skies bless green beings Beauty holds eyes to ransom Love Sugars the soul Joseph Osita For John Moses Freeman's Power of observation contest

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Date: 7/24/2011 2:18:00 PM
Joseph, congratulations on your very fine win in the contest! Sweet Haiku to match the fantastic photo. Annalise
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Date: 7/23/2011 8:09:00 PM
Congrats Joseph on your splendid win with these stunning words of poetry luv...
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Date: 7/22/2011 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations Joseph on your win, with this beautiful entry!!!!!!
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Date: 7/22/2011 11:24:00 AM
congratulations Joseph on a great win, David
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Date: 7/22/2011 11:20:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of John,Joseph
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Date: 7/22/2011 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in John Moses Freeman's contest "Power Of Observation" Joseph. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/22/2011 8:41:00 AM
Joseph, Also with graces provided, you did well in gracing the sponsor. Congratulations on your accomplished endeavor! Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/22/2011 8:17:00 AM
congratulations on your win in john's contest, joseph :)
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Date: 7/21/2011 9:33:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this Joseph-- really like that last line of yours-- made me smile :D -- thank you for your comment in my poem :D
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Date: 7/20/2011 8:26:00 AM
hey Joseph, great Haiku, good luck, thanks for your kind words, David
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Date: 7/19/2011 1:33:00 AM
tremendous imagery, joseph... seems you are now really oh so fine!.. winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/18/2011 5:49:00 PM
Lovely take on the contest's theme, Joseph
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Date: 7/18/2011 11:50:00 AM
powerful and intense piece Joseph.. luv that second line.. very creative.. good luck in the contest...
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Date: 7/18/2011 11:28:00 AM
I am stopping by to thank you so much for your comments. They are truly appreciated. Wishing you a wonderful week full of inspiration Joseph. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2011 9:44:00 AM
very pretty. I love the 2nd line. nice ending too. love is sweet and so good for you too! good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 7/18/2011 7:52:00 AM
A nice, vertical medley. Each verse line is symetrical, and the overall poem is congruent. Enjoyed your well-crafted poem.
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Date: 7/18/2011 7:09:00 AM
Very nice. So much in so few words.
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