In Nature's Sanctuary

Blue skies bless green beings
Beauty holds eyes to ransom
Love Sugars the soul



Joseph Osita
For John Moses Freeman's Power of observation contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Haick Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 2:18 PM
Joseph, congratulations on your very fine win in the contest! Sweet Haiku to match the fantastic photo. Annalise
Sweetheart Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 8:09 PM
Congrats Joseph on your splendid win with these stunning words of poetry luv...
Baity Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 11:53 AM
Congratulations Joseph on your win, with this beautiful entry!!!!!!
Williams Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 11:24 AM
congratulations Joseph on a great win, David
Mehta Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 11:20 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of John,Joseph
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 10:36 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in John Moses Freeman's contest "Power Of Observation" Joseph. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 8:41 AM
Joseph, Also with graces provided, you did well in gracing the sponsor. Congratulations on your accomplished endeavor! Agape, Moses
Susan Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 8:17 AM
congratulations on your win in john's contest, joseph :)
K. Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 9:33 AM
Enjoyed reading this Joseph-- really like that last line of yours-- made me smile :D -- thank you for your comment in my poem :D
Williams Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 8:26 AM
hey Joseph, great Haiku, good luck, thanks for your kind words, David
Onclaud Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 1:33 AM
tremendous imagery, joseph... seems you are now really oh so fine!.. winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
Mehta Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 5:49 PM
Lovely take on the contest's theme, Joseph
Sweetheart Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 11:50 AM
powerful and intense piece Joseph.. luv that second line.. very creative.. good luck in the contest...
Brown Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 11:28 AM
I am stopping by to thank you so much for your comments. They are truly appreciated. Wishing you a wonderful week full of inspiration Joseph. Love, Carol
Susan Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 9:44 AM
very pretty. I love the 2nd line. nice ending too. love is sweet and so good for you too! good luck in the contest :)
Parker Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 7:52 AM
A nice, vertical medley. Each verse line is symetrical, and the overall poem is congruent. Enjoyed your well-crafted poem.
J Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 7:09 AM
Very nice. So much in so few words.
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