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In My Subconcious

as the wind blows through the trees a calm cool breeze cools me down a little bit and puts my mind at ease my state of mind normal my focus get cash as i enjoy every breath for as long as it lasts be thankful 4 the time i was given to live always learning new lessons from different things that i did i was only doing my own thing just doing my part got your mind captivated by the thought i just sparked

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Date: 5/4/2010 10:00:00 PM
very impressive, enjoyed it much, have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 5/4/2010 5:15:00 PM
wow, i like this one, we do need to keep focus on what we want... and as we stumble along the way learn from it and continue on with our god givin life, a good one orlandus pleased to read:)
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Date: 5/3/2010 5:44:00 PM
Wonderful write. I like it
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Date: 5/3/2010 10:58:00 AM
I enjoyed that
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