In My Subconcious

as the wind blows through the trees
a calm cool breeze
cools me down a little bit
and puts my mind at ease
my state of mind normal
my focus get cash
as i enjoy every breath
for as long as it lasts
be thankful 4 the time i was given to live
always learning new lessons
from different things that i did
i was only doing my own thing
just doing my part
got your mind captivated 
by the thought i just sparked
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A   Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 10:00 PM
very impressive, enjoyed it much, have a nice one,..p.d.
Trevino Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 5:15 PM
wow, i like this one, we do need to keep focus on what we want... and as we stumble along the way learn from it and continue on with our god givin life, a good one orlandus pleased to read:)
Mehta Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 5:44 PM
Wonderful write. I like it
Palli Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 10:58 AM
I enjoyed that
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace