In My Soul a Window Opened

In my soul a window opened 
and I weave my smiles in crape.
But a wish, so cruelly broken 
fades away in the shadows of the past.
I’m so in love, but deprived of loving,
like nightingale without a voice, 
Why the fate so mercilessly has poisoned
the seed of love, that grew in us.
Life goes away, it runs so quickly,
like dewy drop, which, falls in lake.
It quite true, you live only twice –
when you are born and when you love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 15, 2026 at 7:27 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
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February 7, 2016 at 1:58 AM
Nataliq Georgieva, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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September 12, 2015 at 7:08 AM
Nataliq,, awesome write! I enjoyed reading this poem. Skat
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