In My Skin

This body of mine
Is just a vessel, just a shell
That has no more to tell
About the real me
Than a stone can determine
The depth of a well

This crude casing 
That I have been given
To walk around in
Doesn't fit my soul
It sneers and frowns
And brings me down
Off my high horse

It offers me no solace
No place to hide
This body doesn't fit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Tsiluma Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 1:06 AM
Hi Eve, profound write this! The theme and the expressions have been brought out strongly - the way you've paralleled the body to the vessel drives the point home very well. I’m definitely looking forward to reading more poems from you. Vicky.
Wright Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 6:55 PM
Thank you Vicky, that's very kind, I look forward to reading your work!
Anglesey Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 4:18 PM
Your poem describes your theme perfectly. Congrats on your win :)
Wright Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 7:18 PM
Thank you so much Karen! :)
A  Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 2:39 PM
wow.. this one is amazing... Eve,....... congratulations!!! Love ~SKAT~
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August 11, 2013 at 10:29 AM
Congratulations on your winning place xx
Wright Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 6:55 PM
Thanks so much Mandy! :)
A   Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 6:24 AM
Hello EVE, :-) congratulations!!! , Thank you for the lovely entry.:-) When you have time enjoy the winners and my sweet blog * Called "The Liberty Bell" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15780&PoetID=18720 Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... PS... stop by my newest poem if you like. "Summer Rain" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=498166 XOX-love Linda
A  Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 11:06 PM
A very tight poem Eve,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT :0
Wright Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 7:01 PM
Hi Skat! Thank you so much for your kind welcome and encouraging comments, it really is lovelier than it should be to have positive feedback! I'm worried I'm getting addicted to the forum, so much to read, so little time! Really loving it so far and looking forward to getting to know everyone, Thanks again, Eve.
A   Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 9:45 PM
Hello Eve, wow.. this is deep..., -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@...
Wright Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 6:54 PM
Dear Linda, thank you so much for your welcome and kind comments, I must say you're much friendlier than your name suggests! ;) l'm gradually finding my way around this fantastic site, and really look forward to reading your work, Thank you again, it's lovely to 'meet' you!
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August 2, 2013 at 8:34 AM
Hello new member: Eve. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Wright Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 9:38 AM
Thank you Anne Lise, I am still learning to navigate around the site, loving it so far! :)
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