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In My Shadow

In my shadow stands the best of who I am A part of me that I am proud to be He follows me everywhere I go And says he wants to grow to be like me In my shadow stands the answer to all my dreams A part of me that's learned from my mistakes And as he watches everything I do He doesn't know what a better me he makes In my shadow stands a blessing from above A part of me that makes me want to live To let him know exactly how I feel And show him all the love I have to give In my shadow stands my beginning and my end A part of me that I want the world to see He tries his best to be the best he can To be the man that he is sure to be In my shadow stands the reason I am me A part of me that fills my heart with joy One day soon when he fills his daddy's shoes He'll become the shadow for his own little boy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/6/2010 9:00:00 AM
I have five children, three are in college and two still in high school. Each one fills me with awe as I watch them become the adults they are growing into. And now, a grandson, too. I don't know why they think I'm so full of wisdom, I don't see what about me warrants such admiration from them. They humble me when they emulate me. I can not imagine life without them. Very nice piece of yours I chose to read today. Emotional for me, to say the least.
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Date: 10/5/2010 1:20:00 PM
wow, moving poem! :)
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Date: 10/4/2010 1:17:00 PM
I am surprised to read a rhymed poem instead of a haiku, Larry. enjoyed In My Shadow
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Date: 10/4/2010 11:39:00 AM
absolutely adorable, just love it
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Date: 10/4/2010 11:22:00 AM
Outstanding, Larry. What a great word picture. Really enjoyed. Have a great week. Ralph
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