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Your masculinity covers my foundation nourishing my earth And I reverence your sustenance, assured of its worth waters exude from my fountains, beholding our passions reflection I kneel before your streams and sip on your affection I drink of your springs, sprouting lingering lust It fills my imagination, quenches my thirst You passage through my valley, so freely You scroll through my gardens and you feed from my trees Filling on my provisions; the sweetest milk and honey Our bodies collide like the crashing of clouds Like the raging waves we roar out loud Fathom the depths of euphoric seas Together we climb mountains until we reach the highest peak

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/16/2012 6:27:00 PM
Top shelf poetry!! Your pen flows so nicely. Love it Hugs Michael
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Date: 10/16/2012 9:03:00 AM
Hmm..soft n tender..
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Date: 10/10/2012 1:43:00 AM
Best traditionally way of presenting a sacred intense of yours, I sensed an old age writing here, the images, one way or the other reveal the lust of mind and imagination, a great job done, keep it up......
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Date: 10/9/2012 2:14:00 PM
Evening Chuiquita In my mind the 3 poems I have read of yours tonight speak of others and I hope this poem is your earthly reward over and over again. Cheers
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Date: 10/5/2012 8:38:00 PM
Im really feelin this
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Date: 10/4/2012 6:17:00 PM
I took every line step by imaginary step.
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Date: 10/4/2012 3:08:00 PM
It is somewhat like Couplets..With just a little work and a few changes it would be classified as that..I enjoyed reading it..You have some good rhymes..Sara
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Date: 10/3/2012 4:27:00 AM
LoVELY!!! I love your take on the theme - you've done it very well. Your use of symbolism and rhyme is on point. Very nice!
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Date: 10/2/2012 10:07:00 PM
Wow!!!
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Date: 10/2/2012 9:57:00 PM
The variety of words is very good. I really like the half rhyme of lust and thirst, they really do work well together. One note though, I think you may have an error using the word passage; did you mean pass? Denver
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Vicky Tsiluma
Date: 10/3/2012 4:29:00 AM
Me thinks the word 'passage' makes it more profound.
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Josh Kirkwood
Date: 10/2/2012 11:20:00 PM
finally someone with the balls to question, and actually help someone. cool, D

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