Chiquitachiamaka Baity Poet I do not know?

In My Mind

Your masculinity covers my foundation nourishing my earth
And I reverence your sustenance, assured of its worth

waters exude from my fountains, beholding our passions reflection
I kneel before your streams and sip on your affection

I drink of your springs, sprouting lingering lust
It fills my imagination, quenches my thirst

You passage through my valley, so freely 
You scroll through my gardens and you feed from my trees
Filling on my provisions; the sweetest milk and honey

Our bodies collide like the crashing of clouds
Like the raging waves we roar out loud

Fathom the depths of euphoric seas 
Together we climb mountains until we reach the highest peak

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Michael J. Falotico October 16, 2012 at 6:27 PM Top shelf poetry!! Your pen flows so nicely. Love it Hugs Michael

M-Key D'Rhymer October 16, 2012 at 9:03 AM Hmm..soft n tender..

Chidozie Uche O. October 10, 2012 at 1:43 AM Best traditionally way of presenting a sacred intense of yours, I sensed an old age writing here, the images, one way or the other reveal the lust of mind and imagination, a great job done, keep it up......

Christopher Flaherty October 9, 2012 at 2:14 PM Evening Chuiquita In my mind the 3 poems I have read of yours tonight speak of others and I hope this poem is your earthly reward over and over again. Cheers

Sha'Ntez Jefferson October 5, 2012 at 8:38 PM Im really feelin this

John Loving Iii October 4, 2012 at 6:17 PM I took every line step by imaginary step.

Sara Kendrick October 4, 2012 at 3:08 PM It is somewhat like Couplets..With just a little work and a few changes it would be classified as that..I enjoyed reading it..You have some good rhymes..Sara

Vicky Tsiluma October 3, 2012 at 4:27 AM LoVELY!!! I love your take on the theme - you've done it very well. Your use of symbolism and rhyme is on point. Very nice!

Kash Poet October 2, 2012 at 10:07 PM Wow!!!

Denver Reese October 2, 2012 at 9:57 PM The variety of words is very good. I really like the half rhyme of lust and thirst, they really do work well together. One note though, I think you may have an error using the word passage; did you mean pass? Denver Vicky Tsiluma October 3, 2012 at 4:29 AM Me thinks the word 'passage' makes it more profound. Josh Kirkwood October 2, 2012 at 11:20 PM finally someone with the balls to question, and actually help someone. cool, D