Andrea Dietrich Poet Lyric

In My Garden

In my garden flourish many blooms that make me feel . . . . . . . . . . . . . . GOOD
Among them thrive those lovely ones I've named as my best. . . . . . . . . . FRIENDS
Come rain or shine, those special ones stand, brilliant where they. . . . . . . ARE
Some blooms, though sweet, don't bring me such delight. they are not. . . .BRIGHT
It's only in fair weather they emerge as sunshine. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . FLOWERS
Others dull and some with drooping petals, I can see . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .IN
my small park, and though each blossom has its place, it's still. . . . . . . . . MY
colorful and cheery friends, the blooms I most admire in my. . . . . . . . . . .GARDEN


inspired by Dane Ann Smith-Johnson's "End Line Word" contest

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Lynn Marie April 2, 2017 at 10:52 PM Inspiring lyrics Andrea :-) Gratitude for friendship in a beautiful flower garden ...a true blessing. Your heart shines in this magnificent piece. It's touching how all different types of flowers make one lovely joyful garden. Nature teaches us a lot through your golden pen.:-) Gorgeous writing. lynnxxx I'm curious if there is a poem form name as it is incredibly well crafted.

Poet Destroyer A January 5, 2013 at 12:09 AM a nice poem of inspiration..pd

Kash Poet January 16, 2011 at 1:29 PM Wonderful !you are a complete and versatille poet!-kashinath

Carrie Richards February 16, 2010 at 8:28 AM Oh yes....this one will do well in the contest...betcha!!!! :)

James Marshall Goff February 15, 2010 at 5:14 PM wow! Andrea! so well constructed, with great flow! a winner! jimbo

Brian Strand February 15, 2010 at 12:05 AM Lovely thought Andrea.Best wishes in the contest.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Matthew Anish February 13, 2010 at 9:23 PM Very clever work. Keep 'em coming Yours Matthew Anish

Robyn Blauw February 12, 2010 at 11:17 PM This is so clever. I have not seen a poem written like this before with a message at the end of the lines and messages in the lines........well done. Thank you for the comment on my poem

Charmaine Chircop February 12, 2010 at 11:13 PM Hello Andrea,tnks for your comment,and re your question,Yes i did try the'End Line poem',I love it,I don't participate in contests,but I did one,a simple one indeed:)Charma

Edward Ford February 12, 2010 at 11:06 PM A cheerful post Andrea

Marty Owens February 12, 2010 at 9:33 PM This is a beautiful end line poem...I love your theme of the garden...Hey Andrea you weren't supposed to guess it but I think you did....lol Marty

Margaret Foster February 12, 2010 at 9:14 PM very well done, this reads well and makes sense. I can't seem to get the hang of this new form my efforts have all been gibberish. good work...Margaret

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 12, 2010 at 6:40 PM Good luck in the contest... almost forgot ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 12, 2010 at 6:38 PM Good job with the new form.. please let Dane Ann and HG know so they can add this poem and your name to the list they are compiling to keep track of how many poets have attempted this new form.. a sweet fragrant poem.. from a sweet lady.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Caroline Cécile Delacroix February 12, 2010 at 6:29 PM Very nice write in the interesting format. Yours is very colorful, filled with perfume and thanks for taking me on a tour of your garden. Thanks also for your comments on my poem, Andrea. Best wishes, Caroline.

Sara Kendrick February 12, 2010 at 4:50 PM Great idea and topic for this kind of write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Charmaine Chircop February 12, 2010 at 4:00 PM Excellent poem..beautiful indeed..Friendship is a treasure indeed..Charma