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In My Garden

In my garden flourish many blooms that make me feel . . . . . . . . . . . . . . GOOD Among them thrive those lovely ones I've named as my best. . . . . . . . . . FRIENDS Come rain or shine, those special ones stand, brilliant where they. . . . . . . ARE Some blooms, though sweet, don't bring me such delight. they are not. . . .BRIGHT It's only in fair weather they emerge as sunshine. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . FLOWERS Others dull and some with drooping petals, I can see . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .IN my small park, and though each blossom has its place, it's still. . . . . . . . . MY colorful and cheery friends, the blooms I most admire in my. . . . . . . . . . .GARDEN inspired by Dane Ann Smith-Johnson's "End Line Word" contest

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Date: 4/2/2017 10:52:00 PM
Inspiring lyrics Andrea :-) Gratitude for friendship in a beautiful flower garden ...a true blessing. Your heart shines in this magnificent piece. It's touching how all different types of flowers make one lovely joyful garden. Nature teaches us a lot through your golden pen.:-) Gorgeous writing. lynnxxx I'm curious if there is a poem form name as it is incredibly well crafted.
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Date: 1/5/2013 12:09:00 AM
a nice poem of inspiration..pd
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Date: 1/16/2011 1:29:00 PM
Wonderful !you are a complete and versatille poet!-kashinath
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Date: 2/16/2010 8:28:00 AM
Oh yes....this one will do well in the contest...betcha!!!! :)
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Date: 2/15/2010 5:14:00 PM
wow! Andrea! so well constructed, with great flow! a winner! jimbo
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Date: 2/15/2010 12:05:00 AM
Lovely thought Andrea.Best wishes in the contest.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 2/13/2010 9:23:00 PM
Very clever work. Keep 'em coming Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/12/2010 11:17:00 PM
This is so clever. I have not seen a poem written like this before with a message at the end of the lines and messages in the lines........well done. Thank you for the comment on my poem
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Date: 2/12/2010 11:13:00 PM
Hello Andrea,tnks for your comment,and re your question,Yes i did try the'End Line poem',I love it,I don't participate in contests,but I did one,a simple one indeed:)Charma
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Date: 2/12/2010 11:06:00 PM
A cheerful post Andrea
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Date: 2/12/2010 9:33:00 PM
This is a beautiful end line poem...I love your theme of the garden...Hey Andrea you weren't supposed to guess it but I think you did....lol Marty
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Date: 2/12/2010 9:14:00 PM
very well done, this reads well and makes sense. I can't seem to get the hang of this new form my efforts have all been gibberish. good work...Margaret
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Date: 2/12/2010 6:40:00 PM
Good luck in the contest... almost forgot ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/12/2010 6:38:00 PM
Good job with the new form.. please let Dane Ann and HG know so they can add this poem and your name to the list they are compiling to keep track of how many poets have attempted this new form.. a sweet fragrant poem.. from a sweet lady.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/12/2010 6:29:00 PM
Very nice write in the interesting format. Yours is very colorful, filled with perfume and thanks for taking me on a tour of your garden. Thanks also for your comments on my poem, Andrea. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 2/12/2010 4:50:00 PM
Great idea and topic for this kind of write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 2/12/2010 4:00:00 PM
Excellent poem..beautiful indeed..Friendship is a treasure indeed..Charma
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