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One to ponder: , The other in wonder, With me added as your Newest member ... In the end, we will not remember, Why this tragedy comes mostly in December, Amber signal to warn us of coming danger, Of fanatic groups with their uncontrollable anger, The rich getting richer, The poor getting poorer, And the nights getting darker, When this winter getting colder, The time of Judgement is getting nearer, Alas we are not getting any wiser, Nor the world's leaders getting any smarter, Believe me when I say we are running in circles, As this peace of nations falls into darkness, A new set of evil is scheming in shadows, The chosen one is born and among us, The Son of the UnHoly has brought his game, To teach,preach, reach out and abuse, Every mankind of goodness on trial, Or bear the Mark of the Ancient Dragon! Give some and share your wealth, Take extra care of your own health, There is no fast solution to the problems we have, There is no rush coz there is no easy way out, I have lost my mind and faith. We are sitting ducks and easy bait, To many soliders boys we got to play with their lives, Who gives a Damn if we live or die? Prepare yourself With drums of battle, The ships are ready to set sail thru the ocean, And fighter planes dogfighting in gunsmoke. Beware the weather is playing havoc, And disaster strikes in many colours, Super huge storms and gigantic forest fires, Mother Nature has lost her marbles, Gaia losing faith on us humans, Nothing gain by killing Atlas! The days are numbered my friends, And prophecy of old been told, To younger generation to hear, And bear witness of what is to come, Is this too long or wasting your time, Reading other blogs,forum or poems, The message is crystal clear, Your conscience is your only salvation, I am only a poet, And a humble simple mortal, Nothing special nor wise like others, My double has made this known to all the readers, This is the end of this insignificant poem... .....As I alway say like my trademark... This is the End... Need I say more?...

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Date: 9/23/2013 11:08:00 PM
This is some very strong, deep, truthful, honest, and full of thought. You give the reader something to feel and ponder. nice job
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/24/2013 12:27:00 AM
Just shooting off what's on my heart my mind. . . this poem speaks on its own. . . I truly believe this poem will be more well known than its owner. . . me . . . and i don't wish to change or edit it one bit more or less. . thanks Robin Davis
Date: 8/29/2013 9:42:00 AM
Again, you bring a very modern and current feel to this piece; it may be your strength, to break away from the archaic poets such as myself, and focus on what's going on today. You are pretty direct, and that is also a strength. I tend to meander all over the place with my writing, wandering here and there, to and fro, and you speak very straight-forward. It's too long for my personal taste, but then I have been told my pieces are too short so maybe yours is the perfect. Good job; kudos! :)
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/29/2013 4:44:00 PM
you are right, I've been writing some very long ones more like tales that's why yours are more graceful, that what makes you special too. thanks
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Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/29/2013 9:42:00 AM
*perfect length

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