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In My Dreams As I walked along the beach today My eyes drawn to the sand A precious stone gleamed at me Perched on a golden band I looked around this early morn But no one was in sight No soul to claim this treasure trove And so I thought I might As I pluck it from the surf My fortune seemed complete So I strolled up to a mound of sand And there I took a seat That's when I held it in my hand And rolled it to and fro As the Sun lit up the gold And made the Diamond glow It was then as if a shadow came and covered my delight To think my gain was someones loss It didn't seem quiet right I did not know the reasons It wasn't on Her hand Or how it came to be, to me Half hidden in the sand But when I stood, and turned for home I saw Her standing still With hand out stretched and fingers spread She softly said " I will "

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Date: 5/20/2018 7:42:00 AM
Beautifully penned Jerry..
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Date: 5/17/2018 11:18:00 PM
Her lucky day :) Love your rhyme.
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Date: 5/17/2018 11:26:00 AM
I think I'd probably hock the ring! You pen beautiful smiles, Jerry.
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Date: 5/16/2018 8:26:00 PM
G'day Jerry ... great! I wondered where in the hell is this going and what a pleasant and humorous surprise - ta Jerry - Lindsay
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Date: 5/16/2018 7:26:00 PM
aww Jerry this is absolutely gorgeous, shame it was just a beautiful dream:-) hugs jan xx
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