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In My Dream

In my dream, I see you cry. A tear of sadness, and I wonder why. In my dream, I see the pain. A pain so deep, I feel the strain. In my dream, I see the sadness. A sadness caused, by all this madness. In my dream, I see you kneel. You kneel before us, so we will heal In my dream, I see you pray. You pray for peace and love to stay. In my dream, through your eyes I see. A world that is dying before you and me. In my dream, you stand up tall. And spread your arms to hug us all. In my dream, your message is heard. And the world starts to speak your very word. In my dream, we unite as one. And all this madness is undone. In my dream, you smile down. Upon a world that honors your crown.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/6/2015 8:22:00 PM
Janet, this is beautifully penned. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. A 7 from me. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 3/6/2015 6:32:00 PM
Dear Janet, Wow what a talent you have, simply wonderful I'm clapping on the other side Of the internet screen I throughly enjoyed this marvelious work of yours, glad I stopped by to read it, cheri
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Janet Eaton
Date: 3/6/2015 7:21:00 PM
Hi Cheri. Thank you so much for stopping in and leaving such wonderful comments. So glad you enjoyed. Janet
Date: 2/13/2015 8:21:00 AM
Hi Janet. This is a wonderful dream that you have put into words and a prayer that so many of us have. The joy of God's can surely unite us all and someday it will happen. Very much enjoyed this one, my friend..... Robert.
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/13/2015 9:02:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words Robert. Have a blessed day:)
Date: 2/5/2015 2:18:00 PM
- Touching and lovely poem, Janet - // Anne-Lise :)
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/5/2015 4:40:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.

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