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In My Daydream

I found you
     in my daydream
          picking
               frangipani
                    One stuck in your hair;
                         twirling one
                              like fan.

You slowly...
     turned, then...
          winked and smiled,
               sucking me
                    into the vortex
                         of your seduction. T'was...
                               a....            

sight most ethereal!

                    (Yalto)                      

"Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly.
Lines 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables

Date posted: 07/30/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Pandit Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 6:07 AM
I see her with frangipani in her hair, as she turns and winks. Delightfully romantic, Edward. You always shine in your signature form. This poem is awesome! Into my FAVES.
Ibeh Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 8:05 AM
Thank you very much indeed for the glowing feedback and the FAV, Vijay:-) Most obliged.
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