In My Back Garden

that barn owl in the tree must know something,
quietly it looks, follows all night long,
looks from left, right, left.. like pendulum swing,
its ears pricked, is someone humming a song?

autumn leaves move about in the slow wind,
like wed pair in love frolicking a dance,
wind chime plays loud as the night rains rescind,
past me sails hint of jasmine, dare I glance?

wind keeps the tempo as thunder rolls on,
glass door is adorned in silver droplets, 
autumn roses strewn right across the lawn,
do I hear someone with dancing anklets?

Dark was the night and eery at its best,
eyes saw nothing but knew was not alone,
to wedding of spirits, have I been guest?
mystery for me, could the owl have known?

2nd placement
Written 20/10/2023
rhyme abab 10 syllables each line
Tanya Kitchin sponsored
Spooky Halloween Rhyme, Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kauffman Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 11:10 AM
Krish, this is so creative and spooky! Wonderful blending of images to create the sense of "not alone" at the "wedding of spirits." Congratulations on your win! Blessings!
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 11:13 AM
Thanks Sam!! Delighted you like it! Much obliged!
Kitchin Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 4:04 PM
Krish, I enjoyed your spooky poem, love the owl imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 4:16 PM
Thanks Tania!! Pleased you placed it in your contest! Delighted to win!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 5:14 AM
Beautiful, even though spooky! Your images are perfect for Halloween mood, and the rhyme flows exquisitely! To my Faves. Best wishes ~ Mala
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 7:34 AM
Thanks Mala!! Honoured that you fav it!!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 7:53 AM
Very interesting, Krish! … to wedding of spirits, have I been guest…pendulum swings as the owl swivels left right… do I hear someone with dancing anklets…a very cool write, my friend!
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 8:33 AM
Thanks Kim! Halloween mood! In the spirit mood!
Meadows Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 7:37 AM
A good poem. Well done.
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 8:34 AM
Thanks Jeanette! Much appreciate your support.
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